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RE: Tiny Particles - Written As A Gentle Reminder!

in #poetry5 years ago

Beautifully written @trucklife-family! I'm not much of a poem person for writing them...but your style is written beautifully! I particularly like the part about "Right now in this very moment, THERE IS ONLY YOU.

The power of "now" is so important to realize. Taking notice of life around us is something we need to do more of. Too many people in this world simply don't take in the world around them.

Thank you for being present, and reminding those that stopped to read your poem of the same ;-)

Be well!

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Thank you @steelborne for your beautiful words, they mean a lot xx