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RE: 'Eyelids' - an Original Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

the way I see things
your conception of
"the both of us"
has got to go.


(sorry, I am not sure how to match your formatting)

I really liked this stanza in particular and I feel it is one a lot of people could relate to.

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Thanks for your feedback @veckinon - glad you found something relatable :)