This is another lovely freewrite hosted by @mariannewest as usual. This is the 193 freewrite and I am some days behind but no rush.
The freewrite is five minutes of writing with deliberate thought, without restriction to your ideas as they pour into life on your screen.
I write one at least in a week. It helps me think on the fly, and write properly and with speed. In its own way, it is a part of my learning process here on steemit.
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Today's freewrite prompt is hook.
Time Starts: 5:22am.
HOOKClaimed my thoughts with
The flicker of your long lashes.
You made my limbs dance
With every sweet breath
That escaped your soft lips;
You hooked me, oh darling
You hooked me with your lies.
Squeeze me into your warm embrace,
Feed me with your sweet saliva;
Oh what a taste!
Drug me and use me;
Fillet and grill with foil paper and lime.
With your smile
And whispered strange secrets
With flick of your hair.
You held me like a shuttered door
In the doorway of your heart
And i watched the dusty, empty space
As you turned me to a dead dusty memory.
Peace,
©warpedpoetic.
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Your first line is captivating...
I has messed up mind reading it the first time. But I read it again and I liked it, the way you expressed the words showing it wasn't just a mare look.
And the rest reminds me of the time I read fifty shades of grey trilogy before watching it..
You write so way, I look up to you. Keep inspiring me
Thanks.
This is a wonderful post...keep going high
Thank you
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