I loved the eb and flow of this and how you conveyed the slow unmoving contrasted with the fast hurrying. I don't understand the line about the sow. Maybe I read it too quickly I'll give it another go.
I loved the eb and flow of this and how you conveyed the slow unmoving contrasted with the fast hurrying. I don't understand the line about the sow. Maybe I read it too quickly I'll give it another go.
A sow is a female pig that has had piglets
I know what a sow is. I just don't understand that particular line. I'd like to understand it though. Could you open my eyes?
I was inferring that she went away and got married to another man and had childrens
Gotcha! Well, again. Well done. Really liked your poem :)