Poem / Independance

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

Independence

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I am so lost
N othing frustrates me more
Doing everything I can to be an independant man
E ach day I try to be the best in
P eoples eyes
E very step I make is to establish my independance, yet...
N othing happens, I'm still treated like a boy
D epending on other's drives me mad
E verywhere I go I have to be carted by my dad
N othing I
C an do by myself
E ven buying a bike, I'm still on lock down, I have no life...

By Ethan
2017/08/24

P.S. I am a bit low on data at the moment so I am not able to steem as much...

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Comments

[cabbagepatch]

Your poem sounds like what young men at your age feel like. But take heart, your life will change soon when you graduate. Too young to be older and too old to be younger. That is life unfortunately. Have a good day tomorrow and enjoy your present moment! :D

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

Yeah it hopefully will. But I've seen with my older brothers that they are still at home at age 21 and still dependent.

[cabbagepatch]

Ethan, just because your brothers are still at home does not mean that you can't live a very independent and joy filled life. Never let anything stop you from doing what you feel makes you happy and free. Only your own doubts or fears can stop you. Be free and present and you will find your own life path! :D

[mohammedfelahi]

poetic

[mrblu]

upvoted master.kindly see also my new one poem..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-blupost-poem-look-unto-my-eyes

[bobokyaw]

Great post

[samuraiz]

[cazadorxd17]

nice

[osita21]

cool

[steemit2020]

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[paolasofy25]

so japanesse xD

[rayvictor]

Nice one. Really well thought!

If you like, you could check up my blog @rayvictor when you are free, I offer creative stuffs too and am willing to learn from your expertise!

[gail2911]

Nice poem ! Independence is such a heavy word that also means heavy responsibility.. :)

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

Very true :)

[travelwithusto]

very good please more of it. how many hours or days do you need to create one?

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

Depends on how I feel, It could be anything from 15min to 2 hours

[pingwins]

I am a huge fan of acrostic poems like this. They convey so much with their special meaning, hidden in the first letter of each line. It is a lesson in life. Life is an acrostic manifestation of consciousness sometimes. :)

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

I like making these types of poems, they are fun and bring a more challenging environment.

[mhelows]

Wow! You are indeed a talented person. :) Your poems are really nice.