Poem / No Place I'd rather Be

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No Place I'd rather Be

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No place I'd rather be
Standing here with you
Gazing out at the light blue sea


There's a place I used to know
That was known as the best cove
It had wide white sandy beaches
And waves that curled over like dried leaches

The fish were in arms reach
There was nothing better than this beach
In the evenings it was to hot to sleep
Instead I'd wonder alongside the sea


The sand between my toes
The warm breeze in my nose
The soft spray of the surf
Made my reminiscing worth

This beach was our favorite
You left but I will never forget
As much as I'd wanna stay away from here
There's no place I'd rather be
on this sand by this sea

By Ethan
2017/07/07

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Your poem sounds like a romantic poem, but also about nature because of the photos and nouns of the sea and stuff.

I love poetry, soon I will be publishing my poems, but in Spanish

Thats super lovely senpai!

Upvote! I like your content, keep it coming. Also, fun fact: 8% of people have an extra rib, lol:D

Nice , will follow, upvoted, please upvote me too

nice post ,,, you have good blog , Good luck. Comrade

beautiful and nicely done.

No Place I'd rather Be than my fathers land, you make me remember home.....just follow and upvote ya

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hi, I live in Myanmar Country.
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Nice! Will be looking forward to your posts! :-)

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Good work man.

Wow nice photo
Thank you

Great post brother! Hey would you help me?
I am new to steemit but in the theme of poetry I do not belong to any community :(

Well all I can advise is to look for fellow poets, they are a lovely bunch. establish a connection with them and they will follow :)

How the hell do you get a shot like that fantastic, cheers mike

Ahhh these do not belong to me as I linked the original in the credits ;)

Still very good pictures cheers mate

Great words Ethan, put me right onto the beach!

Thanks man ☺

Really inspiring poetry and I look forward to seeing more of it in the future. I think you’d really enjoy a recent post of mine...take a quick read and let me know what you think - https://steemit.com/life/@tayken/this-is-my-life-via-gifs

Oh, and remember, be yourself, because nobody else does it better -- Full #Steem ahead @xxsenpaixsamaxx :)

Much ❤
@Tayken

Thank you, I'll Check it out :)

What a beautiful poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx ! It really touched my heart!

Thank you ☻

Ethan, what a beautiful poem and the beautiful beach cove you were talking about. Sometimes memories can be very hard but sometimes you have to try to face them when you are ready and then move on. Don't let your painful memory stop you from going to the beach. My father always told me that the ocean was healing because nature will embrace you in its natural splendor and help to ease your pain. I go to the beach to heal physically and emotionally. The cool breezes will touch your face and help you have a moment of peace. And the waves will talk to you of flowing movement to remind you that life is not stagnant. Embrace nature and she will give you new positive energy to heal and grow. I highly recommend that you look up a fellow Steemit contributor, @ericvancewalton, who wrote a book called the Perfect Pause. I bought his book from Amazon and after reading it, it really gave me inspiration. He has had a challenging life but was able to find his way to where he is today. He found insight from his struggles and eventually worked his way to meditation. He has shared some snippets of his book in Steemit so look him up. He also is the one I mentioned if you need advise about writing a book. I know he would like to help others. You have so much potential. I know you are probably getting tired of me always saying the same thing. I can't help it because I really speak from the heart!

Also I would like to ask if you don't mind reading my new post called Down Memory Lane #1: Remembering The Old Times. I just need some initial support to build up my steemit. Sorry to ask this. It is deeply appreciated!

Love this!

I loved the photo of the wave, beautifully captured. Your poem is so romantic and sentimental. I loved the sea and beaches too, and any place that we spend with our loved ones hold a special place in our hearts.

aww... that was really good! Thanks for sharing this poem. :)

Thanks mate ☺

anytime! :)