ood day to you all, I hope you are doing very well
and that you follow your hearts as I work hard to try to do every day.
Today I wanted to share a poem I wrote on YouTube, trying out how it was to just... write a poem on video. The result is a quite "slow" movie, even though a lot is edited away. This is the second one from the series (if I remember correctly), and here I was inspired by some crystals and a profound feeling of alien mysteries!
I made this poem up as I filmed the video, and it took me approximately 30 minutes to write it. I am quite pleased, especially with how I made the end of it!
Anyways, I hope you enjoy this piece!
Crystal Cave
It glimmered as I saw it,
this light and cryptic wave:
a sacred space of crystals
I found inside a cave.
The crystals were these secret rooms
with lights inside each one
and all of them were special
made in the sign of sun.
And then I saw this greatest thing,
the crystals carried texts
I saw these ancient symbols
a language quite perplexed.
At last, I found the answer
in middle of the room
a little book with ancient signs
inside this age-old tomb.
But knowledge, stay forbidden!
I’m scared of ancient truths!
I want to stay in status quo
and hide these sacred proofs!
So, I went home and hid my tracks
I never told a soul
and rest is story – how you found
this poem in a scroll.
Dearest Reader,
I hope you enjoyed - and if you want me to write something poetic and mysterious - you may only ask!
Until then - Peace out!
Very nice @vuds, I like the fact it's a short story written inside a poem, with the conclusion that some things are best left unseen. Crystals are so mysterious and filled with energy. Thank you :)
Thank you @chaosreignstv! Indeed that is one of the points of my poem. Thank you for pointing it out! And thank you for reading, upvoting and commenting!
Beautiful poem
Thank you! ^^
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