RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #14 SUBMISSION THREAD! - WIN SBD FOR YOUR RAPS! SUBMIT YOUR VIDEOS HERE

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What is the Rap Challenge?

The SteemIT Rap Challenge is a weekly Hip-Hop competition for SBD. I launched this initiative to help grow the Hip-Hop community here on SteemIT. There are tons of rappers here and there wasn't a specific contest that gave these MC's a chance to compete against one another. Battling is one of the foundations of Hip-Hop culture so it is only right to have a Hip-Hop battle contest right here on our favorite social media platform.

Week 13

If you are part of the rap challenge this week submit your videos here and enter for a chance to win prizes! For those who have been with the rap challenge from the beginning, thank you for all your support. We have made Hip-Hop come alive on steemit, now let's keep on giving Hip-Hop some STEEM! Submit your videos!

Interested in joining?

Every week on Sunday I make a blog post with the beats for that week. So if you want to join the Rap Challenge just come to blog on Sunday and check the weekly rap challenge thread for the new beats.

Official Judges
@rondonson, @alao, @slickhustler007

LET THE GAMES BEGIN!! SUBMIT YOUR VIDEOS HERE AS A COMMENT ON THIS THREAD.

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Rappers I'm yoga stretching, with my focused efforts, i'll slow mo my weapon, and put it to your throat and necklace, I uphold the record, that ain't no punch, i hold the record, for vocals that wreck it, come close to my section, in seconds, you'll see ya self in the trenches like you flashed and went to Venice, it's vivid how my pen mentions, my pen a grenande and the pen I pulled and pelt it, you felt it. My heart cold like a Celtic, be in Atlanta, on Felton, pull up on me like excerc-size, size the crew up like , vegeta,ble shit we not smelling, I'm a G, their an Effort. Nas was born, then I was born, I got this beat to inherit. See through you clearly, I'm an, anamolly, what's the need to compare me, when I don't heed to your heed to parody, Move to my own beat, like the band fell asleep on me actually. If theres no weed I leave gradually, I stay smoking like factories, I go in like a battery. You submit to rapchallenge, now you know you a casualty..This a trap, I just grab da beat, had lock it, like Dallas P.. Where i'm from its just apathy, bullet hit ya back, and bandits laugh and run off all happily, my block hot like cali be smelling loud like khalid be, I'm pushing horses cavalries, , ya rhymes sweet cavity, you off beat, but you had it. My name's Geechi

God damn those lyric's are on point man

Preciate bro. We missed you this time.

Damn nice!! Keeps raising the bar with BARS!

Preciate it bro. Nice post. You came with guns out this time. Good shit.

We definitely gotta uphold the lyricism and set the standards high. Keep it up bro. Barred up as well.

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Sorry @geechidan, I hope you understand that it's ALL love!.. <3

Original post: Steemit state of mind


Best of luck everyone!

Nice, like how you rap'd about steem

Thank you haha tried to put the little I know about it in there

Ayyyyy. That shit went hard bro. Very good i must say. Vwell done.

Thank you means a lot!

Cryptocurrency fused bars. I love the comraderie and competitiveness. We gotta push one another to grow and stay on point. Nice entry man

Thank you for listening I really tried to balance those. And definately inspired by how this competition pushes me. Just giving back some friendly competition! :)

You're very welcome, please keep intertwining that crypto knowledge in your verses, we need more of that here on Steemit, I really enjoy it.

Thanks again! I'll do my best even though "that crypto knowledge" is pretty limited haha. See you in the next round as well?

You're welcome. Yes, definitely see you in the next round I am sure. You can always learn more knowledge each day to add to your versatility of how you approach the topic :)

True, time to study! Good luck!

SAY IT WITH YOUR CHEST!

IM ON MY NY SHIT RIGHT NOW! FUCK IT...

For something that is just your hobby, you definitely got the performance, character, flow and energy down. Solid and imprinting entry man.

sorry its a bit late i was drinking and I passed out lol

Fire!

Yo...you be having bars man. I want to see you work on your breathing. Run while you trying to rap, it's good practice. With all those bars, you need to have good breathing to get time out. Learn to know where to take breaks in between your lines in good places that still allow you to jump back on beat. Okay...All love. Just constructive criticism, because you got the bars. bars are fire.

Willie. My bad. Yeah Willie. Everyone has the potential to be an excellent MC, it's just areas of mastering...It's like training. I train all the time.

Me? or willy?

I'm pretty sure he meant Willy. Geechi just accidentally hit the reply button on your comment.

Holy Guacamole!!

I like the way you structure your syncopation and rhythm. I agree with Geechi, but also, when you memorize your lyrics it is also easier to embody them and flow it more naturally rather than holding a paper and reading it and reacting to the beat. You got a lot of potential in terms of creative flow and delivery. Your lyrics are also well written in pockets of flow

Lyrics:
I'm from the city where the skinny niggas are witty and gritty; jack you up and leave your ass spinning dizzy\ homless niggas jack you up for your Fendi\ i used to rock Timmy's\ to stomp on niggas really\ cop car sirens; howling and whining \ few minutes later... gun shots firing\ state of mind; Iron... Lion in Zion\ Bob Marley playing but the shots keep firing\ who the fuck is living?\ who the fuck is dying? \I hope it ain't my people though; I hope that they surviving \ I know it ain't my people though; my hope is their asylum\ my mind tells me I'm crazy though; my state of mind is lying\ I listen to another source; I listen to my heart\ I'm sorta like an Alchemist; a student of the art\ I'm sort of on the precipice of breaking out the dark\ now that I'm living by the sea, my state of mind is calm\ the ocean gives me clarity; the ocean's my alarm\ I wanna be that rapper living on a fucken farm\and just another rapper with a penthouse in the city\when the farm gets boring and beach life shitty\ I'll still have a spot to go and get bizzy\ coz I'll never forget that i grew up in the big city!

Real message within this art piece. I can definitely relate to it. It is not a game out here. Blessed to be alive and definitely we can't forget where we came from or grew up. Having options to relocate is a beautiful thing. May the gunshots miss many more souls in the chaos of street life and corruption.

thanks man. glad you enjoyed it!

You're most welcome man

Here's my entry:

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Good luck, all! ^_^

Refreshing lyrics, far from cliche, creative and chill flow. Low energy yes but I feel the delivery suited the beat just fine it was only due to the low volume of your voice which made it a bit unbalanced. Nice entry

Thank you. Definitely appreciate the feedback. ^_^

You're most welcome.

Late submission family...but its all good i dont do this 4 a prize...salute to yall!


Check how im living the kid worth a million
middle finger ya feelings make bastards out ya children
in the booth im like pac in juice aiming at ya roof nicca
subliminals gon have u hanging from a noose nicca
im a old soul i dont fux w/ new niccas
new money got me high up bird eye view u niccas
atlanta hawk predator of the sky
falcon state of mind u look like prey when im flying
im a master builder this was all by design
how u got credit but yo card got declined
u retarded think yo bars harder than mine
we know real ones like me is harder to find
ahead of my time you could never catch the future
based on how u play it ima salute ya or shoot ya
u faker than talk shows ima have to mute ya
& if u say its fuck me then the feelings mutual
my whole life on demand u dont need hulu
ya whole life in my hand lil man who you
put me on a Premo track watch me go Guru
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@opinizeunltd/adsactly-rap-challenge-submission

Coming with the bars as usual.
Nice entry bro. It feels good to be back
I am the same way. Definitely do this for the passion and the culture and the impact
Not tripping off the prize because the music if the gift we all share with one another
Very creative entry, nice flow and good transitions throughout.
Salute to all who focus on the penmanship and lyrical craft. It is definitely needing of respect.

Preciate the love my guy!

You already know what it is. God bless

It was hard to understand what you were saying. Maybe next time work on enunciating your words more clearly and feel free to turn the beat up to encourage more energy out of you. Your energy was also low and hurt your delivery. Thanks for sharing though, would love to read the lyrics next time.

Yes you´re right hard to me, I lose the energy cause I can´t pronounce the lyrics, next time I´ll try follow ur advices ^_^Thank u @verbal-d

You're most welcome bro, keep practicing and stay focused and nothing but progress will come from it!

So if I wanted to get in on this I should wait for tomorrow right as that is when the new beats come out?
I am just learning how to even go about doing challenges as there is quite a bit of content already on all or most I find.
Thanks for any feed back on my question. Haha even if I don't get none!

Yeah new beats and rap challenge wk 15 should be released out today sunday. Just follow the rules, which is to up vote the wk 15 announcement post, resteem the wk15 announcement post, and submit your video on your profile friday using #rapchallenge as your first tag, then copy and paste that post link and drop it in the comments with your youtube url link when you see the Submission Video post by rondonson for that week. Best of skill to you

Thanks cool yea I am a ways off from doing challenges.
I need certain things first haha.

No problem, you're welcome


not really a rapper but I thought I'd do a freestyle

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I'm dieing. Eyy it made me laugh. He got heart. LoL...But i think he see's rapping aint easy. LMAO

Bruh I had to.....lol

no it's not. especially when one has a cold, got off late form work and decide to just throw something up before the end of the contest deadline.

Thanks for attempting. This wasn't much of a freestyle though. Try formulating some ideas and take a direction and just flow with it. You don't have to be a rapper to get the formula down. But practice would definitely help. And if you really want to earn steem, then I suggest you do something you are passionate about because this entry showed you weren't really feeling it or dedicated to the craft. Conviction originality, creativity onsistency and effort attracts whale votes, I can testify to that.

Thnx @rondonson for putting this info all together.

I'm gonna be checking these out in the morning. Looking forward to see who is going to smash the beats!!!

i brought the heat this week my g! I took your advise and put more energy on it. Put me in the top 6! Thanks 4 all you do and one love brother.

Hey I know I fell out but I plan on coming back in soon. Just worked on my new site linked to my profile. I'll resteem/upvote for support you can always use the boombox tag for this too!

Not video

@jacobcards Im having a hard time hearing your submission..

In the future use YOUTUBE please for uploading. It makes my life easier, Dtube is still very much in alpha/beta and doesnt stream very well IMHO.

Im still trying to hear your entry without any stops or hiccups

I was having the same issues bro, dtube is prone to having issues early on until they smooth it all out, your video keeps skipping and stopping and tripping out.

Shout out to everyone from Vietnam! Keep bringing that fire!

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