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It was hard to understand what you were saying. Maybe next time work on enunciating your words more clearly and feel free to turn the beat up to encourage more energy out of you. Your energy was also low and hurt your delivery. Thanks for sharing though, would love to read the lyrics next time.

Yes you´re right hard to me, I lose the energy cause I can´t pronounce the lyrics, next time I´ll try follow ur advices ^_^Thank u @verbal-d

You're most welcome bro, keep practicing and stay focused and nothing but progress will come from it!