RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #5 SUBMISSION THREAD

[rondonson]

Hello everyone!

I had something personal happening yesterday and was unable to post this submission thread. If you are part of the rap challenge this week please submit your videos here. Be ready for week #6 tomorrow!

Thanks!

Comments

[obeg]

Hope all is well, here is my off the top freestyle submission.

[verbal-d]

Nice freestyle bro, much respect
Fresh wisdom and inspiration refreshing entry

Steemit world let's go

[chiefmappster]

ayyyy I loved those lyrics man. real shit

[speaktheunspoken]

"Yeah I'm gifted, watching candles sticks, now I'm lifted" Nice bar man!!

[rondonson]

this is fire @obeg!

[ariel1212king]

[verbal-d]

Crypto space all day, respect to the freestylers

"I'm legally blind, they call me Hellen Keller
I'm a stinging bee, I just came from the hive"

[mickeymic]

thnx for the platform homes:

[chiefmappster]

ayyy love your lyrics and flow man

[mickeymic]

thnx man

[chiefmappster]

yessir, keep doing great things

[verbal-d]

Nice bounce, rhythm and flow

My favorite part

"Everybody bluffing, what you catching feelings for?
Time to toughen up the muscle, go and give 'em war!
Toughen up the brain muscle and the heart muscle
It ain't easy though, I know it's a hard hustle"

[mickeymic]

thank you

[verbal-d]

You are most welcome

[alao]

[verbal-d]

Barred up @alao, love the deep message and the wisdom, chill flow

[alao]

Thanks man. You came correct this week as well!!!

[verbal-d]

You're welcome bro, we gotta support, motivate, inspire and educate one another.

[kaykunoichi]

Def my kind of MC. One of my favs on here. Dope

[alao]

Thank you for the comment. I noticed that you followed my friend @ flipsyde71. Thanks for the support!!!

[allcapsonezero]

This is really nice!

[alao]

Thank you for listening !!!

[speaktheunspoken]

Nice bars yo!!

[alao]

Thank you I'm gonna keep them comin!!!

[palisade]

You've got a dope Jurassic 5 style vibe man, I dig it

[alao]

Thanks man. This challenge has forced me to write again.

[burningzeal]

Like a laid back flow, dope

[alao]

Thanks man!!!

[chiefmappster]

ayy I'm one of the judges buddy, if you wanna see areas of improvement check out my review of this week's entries. Helps you understand how we and I judge

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@chiefmappster/a-judge-s-analysis-of-the-rap-challenge-week-5

[alao]

I did!! Upvoted and resteemed.

[benja]

Good vibes, came in strong man!

[alao]

Thanks man. Just doin what I can!!!

[eddiebxxxx]

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@eddiebxxxx/rapchallenge-week-5

-Im from the land where no man can stand/
To give a helpin hand, grasshoppers actin like the bossman/
-Glass bottles in the saucepan, what a life/
-And you fuckin all the hoes, thats nice/
Get the fuck up outta here, fraudin as some buccaneers/
Bo Jackson leg brains, you aint raidin round here/
-I never played for ya team thats full of fear/
-Cus you more like some bucks witout the antlers/
-If you aint on my frequency then i can’t hear/
Im lookin in the mirror, why the fuck you think i came here/
-Yall aint G’s, you just g money/
-So go ahead and ask the local freemasons about me/
Fake and phony actornauts guardin the prison gates/
-Theyre not the slave masters, they’re the fuckin slaves/
-So why would i eat the green ham and eggs/
-I scream fuck the world, thats how a master baits/
-The notoriety of not havin shoes/
-I came out the pit to be a recluse/
Some would call my angels demons, some would call my change deceivin/
-Who gives a fuck, they just sleepin on a rainy weekend/

[verbal-d]

Deep lyrics and I peep the truth and wisdom, nice entry bro

[eddiebxxxx]

Likewise bro, you bring it every week too.

[verbal-d]

Appreciate that, Hip Hop is powerful, so I respect the craft indeed

[verbal-d]

Glad you are back and hope all is good bro, thanks for the update.

[ariel1212king]

Thanks bro ✊️

[verbal-d]

You're very welcome

[allcapsonezero]

[verbal-d]

Nice chill flow entry man

"And the people in the place,well they go free
Every style and face, in the university"

[allcapsonezero]

Thanks!

[verbal-d]

You're most welcome

[chrisgoans]

Hope all is well man...

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@chrisgoans/rap-challenge-week-5-free-mind

Jonez...
Let the beat bump, thinking back to my adolescence
Pouring up another cup and drowning in my misconceptions of my time spent
Where have my days gone?
What am I chasing what am I getting away from?
I was blazed up raise up the shot glass high
Make a toast to the hopes of a better life
Little did I know that my plan was a big lie
Dropped out of school cuz tuition was so high
I'm just Trying to get it right dreams of a bank roll
Rubber band banks and a case full of queso
But I stay low, got a little bit of change though
Debt to the sky, piled high, oh my, just a trap that society sets to the blind eye, gotta get away, break the chains I'm a free mind
I was enslaved but it changed I'm a free mind
Chunk up a deuce say capeche with a peace sign

[verbal-d]

Nice chill entry bro

"Dropped out of school cuz tuition was so high
I'm just Trying to get it right dreams of a bank roll
Rubber band banks and a case full of queso
But I stay low, got a little bit of change though
Debt to the sky, piled high, oh my, just a trap that society sets to the blind eye, gotta get away, break the chains I'm a free mind
I was enslaved but it changed I'm a free mind"

Nice underlying messages here, started to dig beneath the surface

[chrisgoans]

Thanks for checking it out man! I've been trying to dig a little deeper and at first I thought it was super hard being confined to only a minute long. But I think this is a great excercise in writing limiting the time because you are forced to think that much harder and attempt to make every line count in some way.

[verbal-d]

Exactly I completely agree, I'm looking forward to next week's already, this is all good practice.

[inhale]

[verbal-d]

"How long you been in for?/info" Nice wordplay
"Treat people how you wanted be treated" That is always a nice phrase, but some people are sick and twisted and don't care about how they want to be treated. My best friend always says, "Treat people how they want to be treated, and not how you wanted to be treat because we are all different."
"Be the source of fun, compassion" - Definitely resonated with that line, nice

[inhale]

How do you know how they want to be treated?

[verbal-d]

You'll only know if they tell you lol but I get what you're saying

[burningzeal]

Thanks @rondonson for the rap contest. Good luck to everyone entering. Here is my submission.
Lyrics:

I don’t rap, I just spit encrypted messages
Access denied, simpletons can’t enter this
This is for the deep folks, interested to decode
Zoom beyond the pixels, still get the big picture effortless

My pen is the weapon, developing a delicatessen
Selling dead competitors the end of this session
Slash in a FLASH, splash ripples expand, so relatives
Pain’s still in DEVELOPMENT I end em in the DARK ROOM (whooo)

Can’t move, run in place like cartoons
Never harmed you, stab the canvas with some sharp tools
You happen to be on fool, second degree art wounds
Hate sequels, made part two just to kill ya soul too

That is crazy, apt to snap in a BAT of a lash DRACULA
Chewing veins, any blood group will do today
Back to the basics, anyone who trespass become a fresh batch of blood
You OK? Yes my iron deficiency is intact feel amazing

[chiefmappster]

Holy shit. your voice man fuckin epic

[burningzeal]

Thank you sir

[chiefmappster]

you're welcome buddy, keep doing great things

[verbal-d]

Nice voice character entry

"I don’t rap, I just spit encrypted messages
Access denied, simpletons can’t enter this
This is for the deep folks, interested to decode
Zoom beyond the pixels, still get the big picture effortless

My pen is the weapon, developing a delicatessen"

You were picking up nice momentum and rhythm

[burningzeal]

Thanks, I appreciate it. Work hard on my craft

[verbal-d]

Likewise, it shows, you're welcome indeed

[burningzeal]

Thanks @rondonson for this rap challenge. Good luck to everyone! Here is my entry. https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@burningzeal/rap-challenge-5-entry-for-rondonson-contest-encrypted-messages-freeverse

[voyceatlas]

Post the video so you don't get disqualified.

[maxizee]

Biggie vibe & Sensory Details.

I'm coming for ya'll.

Check my Actual post for Lyrics:

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@maxizee/maxi-zee-or-steemit-rap-challenge-5-or-original-entry-ratchet-brat-vibes

[voyceatlas]

I peeped your 90s video... We need way more of that!

[verbal-d]

Good energy and character, keep flowing them lyrics

[ariel1212king]

[decentralizd]

Sending the $50 sbd shortly!

[verbal-d]

Appreciate you sponsoring this contest and Hip Hop movement, you and @pfunk really hold it down for the music community with your financial support for real! Many thanks and high gratitude

[zf1]

Lyrics
Listen to this keytar, going in real hard
Coming for the money Giovanni (pokemon)
Pocket full of Key Cards
Flow is retarded
I'm hot your retardant
Am i James harden or Deangelo Hall ( )
homies flipping D'Angelos, Down at the mall
Grinder on my mind sir, Spark up the headies
Marrio andretti, Paper chasing in my Chevy (chevy chase)
Used to be a gopher, over and over
Added crypto, to my Portfolio
flip off the boss, tell him to kick rocks
Its a Cattle call, no oxen in my replies (oxen = ox ox ox = X's and o's )
Hoes making lattice, up in their knee highs
I Only collude, with girls with a noodle
No i dont canoodle, with chicken heads full of the doodles
She gotta have thoughts, like Hieronymus Bosch
there is heat in my ledger (Heath Ledger)
gold to hodl man, no dent posting bale as a Oldman (Harvey dent, C. Bale, G. Oldman)

[zf1]

Hopefully not to late.