Nice chill entry bro
"Dropped out of school cuz tuition was so high
I'm just Trying to get it right dreams of a bank roll
Rubber band banks and a case full of queso
But I stay low, got a little bit of change though
Debt to the sky, piled high, oh my, just a trap that society sets to the blind eye, gotta get away, break the chains I'm a free mind
I was enslaved but it changed I'm a free mind"
Nice underlying messages here, started to dig beneath the surface
Thanks for checking it out man! I've been trying to dig a little deeper and at first I thought it was super hard being confined to only a minute long. But I think this is a great excercise in writing limiting the time because you are forced to think that much harder and attempt to make every line count in some way.
Exactly I completely agree, I'm looking forward to next week's already, this is all good practice.