Great story.
My initial feeling is that (if the above story happened to me) 32 year old me would be like (if I was single):
But 23 year old me would have been like:
I saw your reply to me on the previous secret-writer @stellabelle and the opposite doesn't hold true for men. The last story had me extremely interested in the sexual details, while this had me interested in where the story would turn next. I wasn't aroused by the end, more interested in what would happen, and I was not disappointed.
Nonetheless, thoroughly enjoyed reading, and as an east coaster can confirm, shit goes down in Ocean City.
wait, so you mean reading a story written from the man's perspective would not interest you in the least? Why not? Actually, I am not sure in my earlier assessment. I like to read stories from everyone's perspective. The story written by a man who had sex with two women in one day, did you read that one? That one was pretty good, very surprising. I don't care who writes the story, as long as it's good, full of twists and turns.
It would interest me in the story telling kind of way: that's awesome bro, let's bro hug it out and tell bro stories all day!
But the level of detail of each feeling, sensation, and desire the woman in your previous secret-writer felt would be....less desirable to read than a women's inner thoughts, feelings, and sensations.
I haven't read that one, only been around these parts a couple weeks and not sure when I discovered your work, but the man who had sex with 2 girls in one day sounds interesting (I'm not proud to say I've done that too). I'll read through some of your past entries now.
I am not sure why I like these stories.....I have always wanted to be inside someone else's mind, for as long as I can remember. I suppose this is the closest I will ever come to achieving that goal. And despite being kind of a control freak in my own life now that I'm a sober adult, coming clean after a number of years being an addict, I enjoy reading about people's real life stories. It's quite fascinating what people have experienced and I honestly have no judgments against anyone, as long as there was no violent abuse involved.......that's where I draw the line, though.Here is that one I talked about where the guy had sex with two different women in one day: https://steemit.com/secret-writer/@stellabelle/secret-writer-the-day-i-made-love-to-two-different-women
Replying to your last reply here because I suspect max depth will be reached if I reply there.
I feel you on getting inside someone else's head. And your backstory sounds interesting, have you written about it? Would like to read
Oh, boy, have I ever! I wrote a book called Un-Crap Your Life at the end of 2015 that details the horrors! And the triumphs! Mostly, I just looked at my entire life as a string of problems, and solutions. It took me over 7 years to figure out how to be self-employed and living out my dreams, with no bosses....I had to get over a bunch of rage, too. Here's the link to my Amazon book:
https://www.amazon.com/Crap-Your-Life-Navigating-Situations-ebook/dp/B017PBLZPA
But here's an absurd video I made while I was a salesperson at a car dealership that details how I felt about being bossed around by others: