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RE: ADSactly contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago (edited)

MIDDLE PART OF THE STORYLINE

The car came to halt abruptly as it ran into the ditch by a big stone.Meanwhile all the door has been locked been a central lock.The impact created by colliding with the stone seriously damaged the driver side of the vehicle.

While Mr Kenny was trying to force the door open ,he noticed that his wife was unconscious and bleeding from her nose,at the same time he heard his daughter calling him with a faint voice from the back seat.At that point, he was between the devil and the deep blue sea.

At a time he pulled himself together with all strength he had and forced the door opened.Oblivious of a fractured arm, he made for the passenger side to rescue his wife and that was when he knew he couldn't help her.He had broken his arm.

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Thank you for your valid summary.