UPDATE: The author for the middle part of SteemShort #2 has been chosen (2018-Jan-02)
The summary with the most upvotes (146) has been written by @aderonkemi
Congratulations, @aderonkemi
Here is the summary:
It was quite a fatal accident for the Kennys as they lay unconsious in the emergency ward for days. Kenny was the first to regain consciousness and all he could clamor for [was] his wife and daughter. The doctor confirmed his wife had yet to regain consciousness but they lost the daughter immediately. He fell into deep sorrow for the death of Cindy.
His wife was discharged some weeks later with partial stroke thereby leaving her almost vegetable on a wheel chair. Sandra had taken dominance over the house by now as she comforted the family on their loss. She took care of the couple [so] selflessly that Kenny's family started clamoring he takes her for a second wife for offsprings sake.
He agreed and took her in. Her mission would have been completed but for the rather disturbing situation at her home. Their husband would rather be with Lynda than with her. In Kenny's heart is a guilt that would hunt him forever and an unforgiveness so strong, he could go to hell for it!
SteemShort #2 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story
SteemShorts are short stories written collaboratively by three different authors and illustrated by an artist/photographer.
The process to create a SteemShort is described in this post: SteemShorts: Collaborative Short Stories.
This is the request for the middle part of the second SteemShort.
The first part has been written by @sistem and can be found below.
Authors that want to write this middle part should send in a comment the summary of their proposed contribution. This summary must be in 100 to 200 words. Any proposed summary that is shorter than 100 words or longer than 200 words will not be considered. The summary must describe the continuation of the story and should be enough open-ended so that several ends for the story could be written.
The chosen author will be the one that have the most upvotes for his summary comment 4 days after this post. The post will be updated to indicate which author has been chosen.
The chosen author will then be instructed how to submit their full constribution. The full contribution need to be between 500 and 1,500 words, with no sound, image or video.
Once the full contribution of the chosen author will be received, another post with this full contribution will request proposals for the last part of the story.
All authors need to agree for a “Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike” (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode).
No title for the short story should be suggested. When the full text of the full story will be known, the three different authors will each propose a title.
So, writers, send your summary proposals.
And, readers, upvote the summaries that you like.
Here is the first part of the story, writen by @sistem (Udekwu Chukwuebuka):
On the 24th of December is Kenny’s birthday. Kenny has anticipated this birthday from the beginning of the year and has plans to make it real big. He had never really been into parties, socials or fun fair and was never interested or allowed himself get talked into doing any of those. His life was relatively one you would call boring and he never got to celebrate his birthday because he was from a poor background and birthdays were never a luxury to reckon with.
Kenny loved keeping to himself and never really had friends, except for few acquaintances who were just used to his very calm and collected personality.
Being the first born child to his parents and having four brothers and two sisters to cater for, Kenny never had time for himself. He was a very hardworking young man who had to work from Monday to Saturday just to have enough to cater for his immediate and extended family. Though his job isn’t one you would call lucrative, he dedicated himself to doing it and often got good appraisals from his boss and colleagues.
Kenny is married to a tall beautiful young lady, Lynda, whose feet he was ready to worship and he revered the dust that came off her feet. Lynda is a light skinned lady whose skin glows like that of a fluorescent lamp. She is from a wealthy family and therefore attended the best schools. She studied Linguistics and so speaks so eloquently, that anyone would think she had never set foot on the shores of Nigeria. Her parents made sure she never lacked anything and even had to send her to the University of Birmingham, United Kingdom, for her Masters degree and when she returned, love struck and she found herself falling head over heels in love with Kenny who worships in the same church with her and who, at the time, was a graduate who just got a job. Lynda’s parents were never in support of their union and vowed never to have anything to do with Lynda if she happens to finally get married to Kenny. That didn’t deter Lynda, as she went ahead to marry Kenny without the consent and blessings of her parents.
Kenny loved his wife so dearly that nothing could ever separate him from his love for his wife, but all that was about to change. Lynda, on the other hand was a sweet loving lady who respected and worshiped her husband. She is a mother to a beautiful girl, Cindy, and would do absolutely anything to keep her man and marriage like most African women would.
Well, trouble started when Kenny got a new and a better job. The young graduate of Electrical Engineering, who used to work in an Electrical Installation company with a basic remuneration of Sixty Thousand Naira (₦60,000) soon landed a job in a multinational Oil and Gas firm and his basic salary grew from seemingly nothing to way over Three Hundred and Fifty Thousand Naira (₦350,000) and that’s when everything changed.
Plans for Kenny’s birthday celebration commenced and he was filled with so much excitement as he was going to celebrate his birthday for the very first time and not just any birthday, but his 35th birthday. He was also excited because, for the very first time, he will be spending so much and wouldn’t feel he has.
After all, he earns over ₦350,000; he thought to himself.
On the 22nd day of December, all preparations had been made and everyone was ready for the big day. The 600 seat capacity hall had been paid for, the cooks were ready as they had all the ingredients handy, ready for the big day. The drinks had also been bought and the family cloth sewn and collected from the tailor but however, one thing was left out. The graphics designer who was supposed to design and print the invitation cards was nowhere to be found and his phone was unreachable. What could have happened to him? Nobody had an answer to that. Kenny became apprehensive and couldn’t keep his cool. He got his car key, got into his Honda Pilot SUV and drove off to the designer’s workshop but found it locked up.
Kenny had no choice but to make a last minute arrangement. He thought of a friend he could call but didn’t have anyone in mind who could give him the kind of quick information he needed. A thought soon crossed his mind and he remembered Miss Sandra, a colleague of his. Sandra is a tall pretty dark skinned lady with a charm that made every man in her work place crave her. She has the shape of a goddess and you could describe her shape using the hour glass. She catches the attention of all and sundry and never seizes to use what she has to get what she wants, if you know what I mean. She had always liked Mr Kenny but he never gave room for such an ungodly relationship and that made Miss Sandra crave him the more.
Kenny picked up his iphone7 plus and dialled Sandra’s number as it was a usual practice in his office to have every colleagues phone number just in-case of emergencies. Miss Sandra picked up her phone and at first was excited getting a call from a man she liked so much, she thought to herself; has he finally decided to loosen up on me? But to her dismay, he only called to ask about the graphic designer who designed her 29th birthday card, which was used to celebrated her birthday just few weeks back. She gave him the contact of the man but also decided to try her luck with Mr Kenny. She asked Kenny to come over to her house so they could have a good time, promising to help him cool off and make him less apprehensive, but Kenny wasn’t ready for any of that so he hissed and hung up the call. This act got Sandra embittered and she vowed she would have Mr Kenny at all cost, stating that no man ever escapes her grip.
Necessary calls were made and by the next day, the invitation cards were printed and distributed. Having had everything set, Mr Kenny gave a sigh of relief and went to bed that night.
On the 24th of December, the big day all have been waiting for, a Saturday to remember, the party started at exactly 3pm. The D.J (Disc Jockey) started with slow lovely songs to warm up the atmosphere and welcome the guests. The opening prayer was made and the chairman of the occasion made his opening remark. The next on the agenda was the couple’s dance and that was when Miss Sandra walked in uninvited. As soon as Mr Kenny saw Sandra, he became uneasy because he knew Sandra was up to something after rudely ending the call on her the previous day. The party continued and Miss Sandra could be seen dancing and drinking, after all she only came to have fun. It wasn’t yet time to strike and that wasn’t her mode of operation.
The party came to an end with a closing remark and Sandra left the venue. Mr Kenny and his wife, Lynda, were filled with excitement because all went as planned. They said their night prayer and retried to bed but Kenny thought to himself; Miss Sandra came to my party uninvited, yet didn’t do anything absurd. Could she be cooking up anything? While he was having these thoughts, sleep took the better part of him and he dozed off.
It was a rainy day and Lynda couldn’t get enough of the nagging, “are you listening to what I am saying?”, she asked Mr Kenny, but he greeted her with silence as he was trying to concentrate on the road to avoid mishap. Lynda wasn’t having any of that as she stretched towards the steering but was met with a resounding slap from Kenny.
Earlier that day, Kenny and Lynda had woken up in a very high spirit as it was the 25th of December and they were both happy for the success of the birthday party and for having seen yet another Christmas. They both hurriedly said their morning prayers and Lynda ran to the other room to wake Cindy up. They had their bath, ate and prepared for church and at exactly 8:00 CAT they made to leave for church when Mr Kenny received a text message on his Phone but unfortunately the phone was with Lynda.
“You slapped me”, She said and in a bid to retaliate, the car skid off the road and ran into a ditch by the road side.
Second Part Summary Entry..
It was quite a fatal accident for the Kennys as they lay unconsious in the emergency ward for days. Kenny was the first to regain consciousness and all he could clamor for was his wife and daughter. The doctor confirmed his wife yet to regain consciousness but they lost the daughter immediately. He fell into deep sorrow for the death of Cindy.
His wife was discharged some weeks later with partial stroke thereby leaving her almost vegetable on a wheel chair. Sandra had taken dominance over the house by now as she comforted the family on their loss. She took care of the couple selflessly that Kenny's family started clamoring he takes her for a second wife for offsprings sake.
He agreed and took her in. Her mission would have been completed but for the rather disturbing situation at her home. Their husband would rather be with Lynda than with her. In Kenny's heart is a guilt that would hunt him forever and an unforgiveness so strong, he could go to hell for it!
Congratulations, @aderonkemi, you are the chosen author for the middle part of the SteemShort #2.
Please, contact me on steemit.chat or discord (vcelier in both cases) for your full contribution.
Go baybie... Nice one
After reading this... I must say, u really have a great writing skill... Awesome dear
Awesome dear.....Good job
Great article. Keep it up
Great article, I totally agree with you, keep it up.
nice one
This is awesome, Nice and cool, keep it up sister.
They want summary of the story and we have given them summary. Shebi we are here? Let's see what they want to ask for again.
Yes oo... I too go like this @rabamaker, you are just so funny and lively.
Good job ma'am
Wish you success dear.
kudus, we are for you.
I wish you good success on this ma'am
Thank you for your valid summary (now).
Nice one dear
I submitted my own entry but I like this one, too!
Interesting
You will make a good writer. Keep It up.
Beautiful... Nice one
This is lit.... Well done.
Nice one aderonkemi
a very good entry... i tip you for the win
Great one.
I wish you the best..
You're winning this one dear. U gat our strong support
Impressive
You've a bombshell up there
Go for it baby. We must win this contest
what a way to wrap it all
Good post you got here
Nice one
Nice entry dear
Nice one, hope to get the main story. Keep it up my very own steemit tutor @aderonkemi
Well constructed ...its like am reading the full context. Great effort dear. Keep it up
This is great ma
Nice one dear.. Keep it up
I wish you success
I love it simple, easy to understand, u are on d right track angel!
Voted
nice one
Nice story.. It took me over 10 hours before I could log in because of bad network but it's worth it.
I trust you win.
Nyc story
Excellent
Good job ronke
Carry go, you're winning this contest.
Go girl! We got your back
A stunning post. Very articulate
great , follow me please
Second Part Entry...
The both of them were rushed to the hospital by passersby. Luckily for Lynda, she sustained minor injuries but Mr. Kenny sustained injuries to his head and lost so much blood and he was placed in Intensive care unit.
Dr. Musa is the doctor assigned to treat Mr. Kenny. To revive Mr. Kenny,blood donations had to be made. Mr. Kenny is a universal donor and getting matching blood group for him was easy. Few weeks later Mr. Kenny was discharged from the hospital but Dr. Musa found out a very scary revelation about Mr. Kenny and his family.
The week before the accident, Mr. Kenny's only daughter Cindy was admitted to the same hospital because she suffered from malaria. Coincidentally, Dr. Musa was also the doctor assigned to treat Scott and blood tests carried out proved his genotype was AS but Lynda and Mr. Kenny were both AA.
Dr. Musa decided to tell Mr. Kenny about his revelation but Mr. Kenny kept calm and acted like nothing happened because He loved Lynda and their daughter. Out of curiosity, Mr. Kenny secretly carried out a DNA test to be sure of Cindy's paternity and what he found was even scarier than he imagined.
Nice! Love the suspense.
Thank you for your valid summary.
Wow good story there! It is becoming a horror story.
Lolz nawa o... See twist. Nice
Wow, the twist in the plot makes me anxious for the next part
Wow!!! Great story line.
Keep it up
Great piece
Nice summary Mikay...funny enough, I'm Kenny and I aslo studied Electrical/Electronics Engineering..
Lol
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I love stories!
This is cool, you have a way of gluing someone to your work. Weldone
Nice post
See scary twist na
Second Part Summary Entry
"Jesus Christ! Lynda, you almost got us killed," Kenny said, his voice drowned by Cindy's shrilling cry. "Ok, I'm sorry for hitting you. But can we discuss this at home?" Lynda was silent. Obviously shaken by the accident. She took Cindy and rocked her to quietness. By this time, passers-by have gathered to come get the car out of the ditch. Car got out fine save a dented bumper and a broken headlight. The rest of the journey was accompanied with silence and troubled emotions.
At home, Kenny knew he owed his wife an explanation. Lots of it. He'd never had an affair. Not Sandra. Not any other woman. "This is just her ploy to set our marriage on a rollercoaster," he said to Lynda, kneeling. She sobbed. He took her in his arms and apologized, promised never to leave, said he would always love her. As he said the words, he remembered Sandra's text and his heart pulsated with anger and guilt. Anger because he was disgusted at her nerve to toy with his marriage. Guilt because within him, he knew he desired Sandra. And wasn't sure if he could keep resisting.
yeah, thank you! haha
I was midway writing but read this and stopped. It needs more upvote, it has a more mature tone and would make the story more interesting.
Thank you @Ninjadroid
You're welcome
Thank you for your valid summary.
Lynda got a hard hit on her head by the car door, went unconscious and got into a coma as the ditch was on her angle of the road, cyndi was alright as she was pinned back with the seatbelt back seat, Kenny was in deep regret, Lynda's parent who hated Kenny from the onset never took the case lightly when they were told, firstly they accused him of being drunk from his birthday the night before the accident and got him arrested, after some investigation and alcohol test he was released, the parent went on with threats if their daughter don't survive.
Kenny was very sober and at this point Sandra was the best companion after apologizing for the text message she sent which was the reason that led to the accident, Sandra called Kenny thrice a day, brings him food, after lots of trial Kenny started accepting her food as an act of kindness, then Sandra drugged him one night with the food she brought, he was weak and sleepy then she took advantage of him and made pictures and videos from it. A week later Lynda came out from coma.
@adsactly
Wow.... Nice story
I love it
Thank you @faetee
@candyman
Thank you for your valid summary.
Good luck to you, @ofishea! I hope you are selected with your entry.
Cheers!
@mitneb
Thank you very much @mitneb
You're welcome, @ofishea!
Cheers!
@mitneb
Second part summary entry
Without asking Kenny, Lynda opened the message Sandra sent. Kenny doesn't password his phone. He felt since he doesn't cheat on his wife, locking his phone might create suspicion so he left it accessible.
What! came the exclamation from Lynda when she read the text Sandra had sent. The content of the message wasn't righteous at all. It was a kind of message that would implicate even an award winning faithful husband.
Without allowing Kenny explain himself, she busted into flames and started abusing him. You bastard so you have been cheating on me. You wretched thing that I pitied to marry even though you were poor and hopeless yet you had the guts to cheat on me. Her words angered Kenny and unconsciously his hands landed on her cheek with all force.
"You slapped me" she said. And in a bid to retaliate, the car skid off the road and ran into a ditch by the road side. Unfortunately Lynda and Cindy were not wearing their seat belts. When Kenny managed to gained consciousness, he couldn't believe his eyes.
Thank you for your valid summary.
The crash was only the beginning, in that ditch could lay all of Kenny's hopes, dreams, and aspirations. As he flickered in and out of consciousness, the scenes of his life started flying by him. The warm glow of a radiating light began to consume him, it felt like floating on a cloud.
But- in a flash, Kenny decided it wasn't his time. He rejected the light lifting from his suffering and gritted down on the harsh reality. He was consumed by darkness, and he had only his own hopes that could be his guiding light, and salvation.
The thoughts of his daughter flashed in his mind, and this hope he had guiding him back to reality was only at first a dim glow, but had transcended into a bright light of warmth. It became blinding, before he knew it, he gasped.
He was back in his body, like a flashback through time. Still on the road, and Lynda was grabbing for the wheel. He was in shock. What had just happened? Was it fate, or a warning sign?
He felt his arm coil, but then he remembered the feeling of hope and the innocence in his daughters eyes.
@Adsactly
@sistem beautifully put :) will you be proposing a middle too? Or letting someone else write next.
@Vcelier is 200 on the dot acceptable?
@sistem is not allowed (by the rules) to submit a proposal for the middle and the last parts of the story.
Yes, 200 words is good. Your summary is 199 words long.
Thank you for your valid summary.
Great imagery. I also submitted an entry (below), but I can see why yours is popular. Really well done.
My submission for the second part:
Lynda dies in the crash. Cindy and Kenny are hurt and need to stay in the hospital to recover. Sandra visits them often, consoling Kenny and playing happily with Cindy. After they’re discharged from the hospital, Sandra brings food to their house and keeps them company. Kenny continues to ask himself why Sandra has been acting so differently, trying to find some ulterior motive. He can’t find any fault with Sandra’s behavior.
Sandra visits regularly for many days after Lynda is laid to rest — so often that Cindy calls her “Aunt Sandra.” One night, after helping put Cindy to bed, she stays with Kenny a little while longer, sitting outside, talking. Sandra confides in him how lonely she is. Kenny is still unsure whether to believe she’s truly lonely, or simply trying to put him in her grasp. But he’s lonely, too. They spend the night together.
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Middle part of Second Steem Short
"Why is this happening to me? Why God!!!!!!!!" Kenny said to himself as he finally woke up feeling hurt on his head.
Fortunately, the air bag around the sides of his car inflated very quickly at the time of the crash. His wife and daughter do not sustain any serious injuries except for bruises. He suddenly smelled something burning from inside his car. Kenny suddenly realized that he need to get his wife and daughter quickly out of there.
With all the strength he had left and no time to waste, he kicked open the car door and pull his wife out of the car. He did the same for his daughter.
As soon as he was a few metres of dragging his daughter away from his car, the SUV exploded. He was speechless and thanked God for giving him his family another chance to live after ironically questioning God after the crash.
Sandra!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He shouted at the top of his lungs.
162 words
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Second Part Summary Entry
For God's sake, that's all I'm thinking about, while I'm on my way to the hospital, with Linda unconscious, I don't know what time and space this happened. When she arrived at the hospital, she was treated quickly, Crystal my mother-in-law arrived and she interrogated me, -- what happened Kenny?
I don't know, she suddenly came out and I didn't even have time to ask her, I'm worried I apologize mother-in-law, but let's talk later, I need to pray for Linda to recover soon.
When Doctor Augusto suddenly arrives, and he says, already Linda is in recovery but there is a detail, it could be that she has lapses of memory, she can go to see it and check it out, when I am coming to the room, I say hello my love, and she answered me,"Who are you? I don't know you. Just at that moment I told myself, what the fuck is going on, I don't know if this was a paradox of fate or if life is just going to make me pay for this mistake I made very hard. Jesus Christ help me.
Thank you for your valid summary.
My summary proposal:
Kenny and Lynda survive the crash but not without consequences. Their daughter doesn't make it out alive. And although both come out maimed from the accident, Lynda has it worse than Kenny, she has her spine damaged in the process, while Kenny suffers mere bruises and a broken ankle, which he has back in an okay condition in less than a month's time. Lynda’s family blame Kenny for the mishap but tries their best to support Lynda seeing that she has lost both the use of her legs, and her child.
Things turn for worse when Kenny gets tired of taking care of a handicapped wife, and decides to get a divorce. Her parents wouldn't hear of it and they threaten to get him arrested if he eventually leaves her, with accusations of him causing the actual accident.
A warning Kenny pays deaf ears to.
@adsactly
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MIDDLE PART OF THE STORYLINE
The car came to halt abruptly as it ran into the ditch by a big stone.Meanwhile all the door has been locked been a central lock.The impact created by colliding with the stone seriously damaged the driver side of the vehicle.
While Mr Kenny was trying to force the door open ,he noticed that his wife was unconscious and bleeding from her nose,at the same time he heard his daughter calling him with a faint voice from the back seat.At that point, he was between the devil and the deep blue sea.
At a time he pulled himself together with all strength he had and forced the door opened.Oblivious of a fractured arm, he made for the passenger side to rescue his wife and that was when he knew he couldn't help her.He had broken his arm.
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Second Part Summary Entry:
Every night it’s the same dream. She is restrained by a safety-belt which digs into her torso and neck. Her parents are screaming, seemingly unaware of their little princess bearing witness to the final moments leading up to their death.
She tries to scream but no words pass her lips. Every time she opens her mouth the safety-belt digs into her chest and throat, painfully restraining her tiny body. Her parents lift their voices, the car speeds up and the safety-belt pulls her further into the darkness of her own terror. Her mother launches into Kenny and then…
"Aaaaah!!!", Cindy screams and shoots upright. It takes her a few moments to realize she's in her bed.
Sometimes she wakes up before the fatal crash, heaving, sweating, crying. But, most nights, she has to witness her parents' death, over and over, without release. The worst nights are, however, when Sandra appears. She opens Lynda’s bloodied hand and takes the cellphone. Mockingly, Sandra reads her text to the corpses one final time:
“I loved the way you looked at me last night. Pity your wife was there. Love, Sandra.”
Cindy raised her trembling fist and knocked on the door.
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My entry
"What's wrong with you, Lynda? ". He was furious, he screamed. " Babe are you okay?" he turned back to Cindy. He saw his daughter unconscious. He worried. He immediately call the ambulance.
She was seriously injured. She was admitted to ICU. They were sitting outside the ICU. " Do you want coffee?", he asked. She was bursting out . He hugged her. " Its Okay". She cried more louder.
After few hours doctor came, " We are sorry, she is no more. ". The air turned into funeral. He suddenly turned to a body. He felt no soul. Lynda fell to ground. But he couldn't react. The doctor called ward men and immediately took her to emergency ward. He stood their in shock.
She died of heart attack. This morning he was the happiest person now he was so alone. He had no one left for live for. Now his only aim was to take revenge.
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the content is no doubt good but I would request to keep it short
Owk well they requested or 500-1500 words. Mayb next times I would work within the frame of 500-1000 words
The middle part of the story is so exciting.
Wow great writing..I appreciate to your content choice and this part just extraordinary ..I wish you win this content ...Best of luck..Resteemit ✌✌✌✌
Thanks bro
Most welcome..
Meanwhile, the previous night Sandra had a nightmare. Where she saw herself killing Kenny, using a razor to scrape up all of Kenny's skin. It was hard, she was terrified by what she was doing, and crying, but was still doing it anyway. She couldn't stop herself.
On waking up she hurried to see the witch doctor again. Getting there she now relates how she applied the charm after, the witch doctor said she didn't get the process wrong. More questioning confirmed that she had let Lynda match the charm also.
"I told you if the lover of the man you're trying to get matches the charm alongside the man she'd hate him dearly".
"But I don't mind if she hates him, that would make our being together even more easy"
"It wouldn't be mere hate! It would be homicidal! The lover would not stop until the man is dead!"
Sandra now realizes. In a rush she was given a counter charm and was off to get it to Lynda.
She finds them all hospitalized, she tries to get the neutralizing charm to Lynda and she fails severally, in a desperate attempt she was caught by the Hospital security.
@nevies, according to the rules you are not allowed to compete for the middle part of SteemShorts #2 and #3, because you were the chosen author of the middle part of SteemShort #1:
Awww, I must have not paid enough attention and missed that one. OK, I'll wait for the next part then. Thank you, Vincent.
It looks like a great competition.I wish success to everyone.But do not get much hope because I will win.. :))
OK. Good
Continue I love that
Lolz
following you ♥
continue
Very nice piece
I’m glad I’m the first to comment
Thank you for the information,i love your content
Amazing story ! will try to post soon on this contest :)
Congratulations to @sistem (Udekwu Chukwuebuka). You are a good Witter I must say. Job well done.
Thank you very much... Never considered myself a good writer. This is heart warming I must say #smiles
Wow
Thanks for share ...
Nice post
Thanks
He was a good scholar.
#smiles
Truth is behind me sitting idle, please catch it.
Wonderful post @adsactly, I'm following you already
greetings know,your writing is great
@sistem nice start, buddy. Hoping I can take the second part!
Ofcoz you can... Just get as many UPVOTES as possible
good job dear your all the best @adsactly
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this great helpful post, tnx
Thank you @yeminthu
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Nice post @adsactly
Enough crypto crypto bored
Good
Awesome story
Good post
Wow..what a nice story...i love this
I am just stopping in to wish you and your family a very wonderful start of your new year 2018 you have my resteem & upvoted
Well done. You are so good at this!
My entry
Kenny opened his eyes to Lynda and Cindy unconcious. He quickly unstrapped Cindy's seatbelt and carried her way from the car. She was still breathing, he was greatful. He dropped her a few meters away from the car and went back for his wife. She too was unconcious and was bleeding profusely as she had hit her head on the windscreen of the car. With tears in his eyes, he move her away from the crashed car. He stood there for minutea trying to stop a vehicle. After about fifty minutes, a car stopped.
Kenny, a familar voice from the car called out.
What are you doing here? and why are you covered in blood?
He was glad. Philip was his colleague from work. He quickly took him to Cindy and Lynda and together they took them to the nearest hospital.
As the doctors checked Cindy and Lynda in the emergency room. Kenny stayed in the waiting room in panic. His friend kept on trying to reassure him that they were going to be okay.
A doctor finally came out of the emergency room. Doctor how are my wife and child? he asked him .
'I am sorry, we tried all we could. They were not breathing.'