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I do believe I forgot to add "snake bite" to that section, but that was what was intended. Thanks for pointing that out - I made a small edit to add that. Thanks for reading and the support :)

It was just a thought. Not meant to be pointing it out.

It's a brilliant story and wonderfully crafted. I loved it.

I even loved the part where the whole gashed leg thing became a non issue as he found an arrowhead and didn't care about his friend...

You gots a lot of talent. Come say hi in our discord: https://discord.gg/4Nu4AJ

You're so kind! When I go back and re-read I see a lot of errors haha
But it was a lot of fun to write which is the point I know.
I saw your panoramic photo today and thought it was so beautiful. That format, the open sky just goes on forever.