Fantastic work! I absolutely love your writing. I find your characters very humane and very relatable, it's hard not to fall for at least one of them in the two stories I've read from you.
I also adored the rythm of the chant at the beginning, it perfectly sets the cult-like mentality of the underdwellers (also, the underworld trope is one of my favorite ones!) Keep up the awesome work!
Thank you very much. The rythm of the anthem in Turkish version is far more better as it is my mother tongue.
That's what I thought, same thing happens to me when writing, for example, poetry, as my mother tongue is Spanish. Yet your anthem translated very nicely though!