I'm glad you enjoyed the story, @preparedwombat and thanks for pointing out these issues! Missing Time was a fun one to write. It's with the editors at the New Yorker now.
I have a few more in the works now. It's been difficult to get into the groove while on the road but after we're back in Minnesota in a week I'll be able to get some serious work done on them. My plan is to publish a short story collection in book form for release before the end of 2020.
I hope all is well and the weather isn't too bad back home.