You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
Now here is the part I don't really like heading home i wanted to get money from the ATM machine to get a my belly filled with enough food and I came across something that will just kill your mind set the QUEE was too long and u can't wait because of the rain that wwas comming Soni had to go to another bank to get my money.It should be coming instead of comming.
Am sorry about that I didn't seen it coming