Nice poem...but, Haiku is a three-lined poem, the first line consisting of five syllables, the second line having seven and the last line with 5 syllables again @virtualself
Nice poem...but, Haiku is a three-lined poem, the first line consisting of five syllables, the second line having seven and the last line with 5 syllables again @virtualself
Tama naman po ah Hahaha
Look at the poem again and count the syllables:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
I guess you counted "moved" as 2 syllables, but it is only one syllable.