The river and the stream both keep flowing
The moon and the stars both keep moving
You'll have to keep moving
You'll have to keep moving
Life doesn't stop anywhere
Don't fear high winds and storms
The paths will leave if you don't walk
Your eyes will then yearn for the destination
You'll have to keep moving
You'll have to keep moving
The one who is in the journey will cross it
The one who stops will end up in a vortex
Forget a boat, even the shore will wash away
The stream of time is very rough
You'll have to keep moving
You'll have to keep moving
In the 2nd line in the 1st verse I would of put:
The moon and the stars both keep glowing
So it goes with the word flowing at the end of the 1st line.
Then with the chorus verse I would put:
You`ll have to keep growing
But who I am to judge.
Thanks for sharing too!
Thankyou for suggestions.I’ll work on this next time.
Your welcome and the more you write, the more you`ll feel it is right too. By writing more and more you will just become so much better as well within a space of 6 to 12 months. It will just glow and flow out of you like a beautiful floating butterfly.
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