In the 2nd line in the 1st verse I would of put:
The moon and the stars both keep glowing
So it goes with the word flowing at the end of the 1st line.
Then with the chorus verse I would put:
You`ll have to keep growing
But who I am to judge.
Thanks for sharing too!
Thankyou for suggestions.I’ll work on this next time.
Your welcome and the more you write, the more you`ll feel it is right too. By writing more and more you will just become so much better as well within a space of 6 to 12 months. It will just glow and flow out of you like a beautiful floating butterfly.