[eleclectico]

My other life in the Polar World

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Fabio, the protagonist of this story, a handsome young man of twenty-three years of age, had a magnetic resonance imaging of the skull, where no organic base was found and it was found that his depression was a product of his genetic predisposition.

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Dan, Fabio's twin died of a rare disease. From that moment Fabio also presents low brain voltage, with predominance of beta and omega waves, according to the results of the electroencephalogram.

However, the neurophysiologist who is evaluating Fabio has prescribed a neurobiocompatibility test, which had to be performed through a biopsy of the posterior lobe of his brain.

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That morning Fabio stopped early and implored God to be a normal man. He arrived at the Complex of Nuclear Neurobiofisiology and was immediately admitted to the operating room, by a beautiful blonde with blue eyes.

Fluorescent lights in the operating room anesthetized Fabio through the photosensitivity of his pupil. Next, Dr. Merkel, assisted by his robot, proceeded to make an incision, with electronic microscopy, extracting a sample of 0.001 millimeters.

Days passed and the results arrived: The extracted epithelial tissue turned out to be nonpathological.

Days later Fabio received an email from his brother Dan, where he explained that the biopsy performed was really the beginning of a genetic experiment and that even though everyone believed him dead, he was in an alternate space, and if he wanted to know more than that place, he must have blind faith in everything Dr. Merkel said.

So Fabio found the door to the polar world, where real life began.

Thanks for reading up here. I appreciate your comments.

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Comments

[arthur.grafo]

I don't know whether to say yes or no.
Uptove?
You obviously have a good idea for a story, but it is difficult to read because of the too many mistakes you make in the language. Steemit is international, for everyone, of all languages. I don't know how you are translating into English, but it is not working.

I suggest you post in your language and in English. If the reader likes it but wants a better translation, you give them the possibility of doing so, as they can use the original (your language) to maybe use a better translation service.

You also do not say, is this the end of your story? It sounded to me like the beginning.

[eleclectico]

Thanks for your advices. This my story in Spanish language: https://steemit.com/microcifi256/@eryh14/concurso-de-microrrelatos-de-ciencia-ficcion-microcifi256-semana-6-el-dia-que-el-tiempo-se-detuvo This is only chapter 1 of my story. Thanks for reading.