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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #20: Valentine Special- 199 words, a lovely prize pool, everyone wins!

in #writing7 years ago

Amanda was the girl of my dreams, something about her got to me, I didn't know what it was but I liked it. She always wore a bright smile on her face, you'd never catch her frowning. One couldn't help but be happy when around. Her smile was infectious.

I didn't have the guts to ask her out, I was loving her from afar. The day before Valentine, someone chatted me up on whatsapp, I was stunned when I found out she was the one. As it turned out, she had a massive crush on me and was waiting for me to ask her out, since I was being chicken about it s he decided to make the move.
I took her in a Valentine's date, it was a memorable experience. We danced with our bodies pressed together, I never knew she was a good dancer. She got us diner, I was really impressed by that gesture. After all the funfair I took her home. On our way to the house, she stopped, held me in the hands, gazed into my eyes for what seemed like eternity, she leaned forward and kisses me so passionately. The Valentine was amazing.