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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #20: Valentine Special- 199 words, a lovely prize pool, everyone wins!

in #writing7 years ago

My first Valentine was with my ex girl friend. She called me by night time to get ready, that she was on her way to lift me for a ride. “Really?”, I wondered. I thought it was going to be much later before she arrived, but still I got myself ready and waited patiently and expectantly. She pulled over in front of my house and we rode off to get a milkshake at our most favourite spot.
After the milkshake, I thought that was all for the day, but then she drove off into a direction which I could not call into memory.

We drove out of the city, into the countryside. There she parked her car and lowered the roof. She asked me to look up. I then looked up to behold the most beautiful sight of my life, star-filled sky!

Before now I had let her know how much I loved starring at the stars, but have never had the privilege of a panoramic view from where I was living. We sat there with our milkshakes and just looked at the stars all through. It was really fun.