The fear of unknown monster to swallow, the fear of unknown disease which infection could be dangerous if not prevented earlier, the chase of dreams the adrenal so many things the orchestra of grasshopper, and a young boy of fourteen come so far from his own land to dream land or unknown land with a little hope of something good and no fear to miseries which lefts back, everything was crystal clear and interlinked with every situation and some fear and excitement encourage me to complete the story as soon as possible and finally the fiction come to it's conclusion and everything was splendid dear friend maybe it's your first fiction short story but it is a masterpiece and I personally suggest you to make another part of this story as what happened to this young boy when he reached to the building or that town and what happened to those who lefts behind.
Good luck my friend I am your new and little follower now.
Good luck for another masterpiece from your side maybe we witness very soon, till then enjoy your creativity and dreamland.
Take care.
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