Hahaha! :))) The last think I thought is that someone will form his story on the actual event. I enjoyed every single paragraph and had fun with the inner dialogue. I'll definitely show it to few friends LOL :) And looks like it has captured a lot of people's attention and love. Well done @negativer!
Did the humor work for you? I think that's the trickiest part of writing a fictonal story. Finding sincere humor that is not distracting but is genuinely funny is a fine line, without being overbearing.
I think sometimes humor can be forced and apparent that the author is trying. This seemed perfectly natural as a part of the character's observations and behaviors. I liked it!
Hahaha! :))) The last think I thought is that someone will form his story on the actual event. I enjoyed every single paragraph and had fun with the inner dialogue. I'll definitely show it to few friends LOL :) And looks like it has captured a lot of people's attention and love. Well done @negativer!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's fun to try and drag a decent story out of a basic and simple photo. Sometimes you end up in weird places.
Absolutely :O))
Did the humor work for you? I think that's the trickiest part of writing a fictonal story. Finding sincere humor that is not distracting but is genuinely funny is a fine line, without being overbearing.
I think sometimes humor can be forced and apparent that the author is trying. This seemed perfectly natural as a part of the character's observations and behaviors. I liked it!