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RE: For Those Who Follow, Part 2 - An Interactive Series! WEEKLY CONTEST GIVING AWAY TOTAL SBD GENERATED FOR EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!

in #writing8 years ago

Another very nice chapter. I really like where you are going with this and I think it is even better that you give us the ability to interact with not only you but the story and building of the story and characters.

What your choice is. & Why you would like to see the story develop in that direction as opposed to any of the other options.

My pick is "Floating." The reason this is my choice is because I like the fantasy aspect and I look forward to that. I loved "Wheel of Time" and the sort. Whats better than using some type of magic or special powers. In this situation I think you can build on this character and how he is experiencing some powers, "learning faster" for example. This seems to flow with the story you are building better than "disappearing."

One idea of your own that you think would make the story better.

Keep up the good work. I think you are on the right track. Maybe he will stay out in the woods as I had hoped in the last chapter.