Thank you for the explanation and maybe also a bad on my part for not having read the previous. A very nice read and not that it matters but I am quite picky at what I read, although here I have been reading a wide variety of things.
Beats spending hours trying to find just the right book.
Well, I hope you won't rip my little freewrite novella to shreds if you read through it.
But, even if you do, I appreciate the feedback, as long as it's constructive.