I didn't get around to recording this one as it was a last minute exercise. I wasn't sure if I would like it or not, but decide it worked well, so just went ahead and posted it. I usually need a bit of time to psych myself up to do a recording, and then upload it, etc. Glad you like it. I haven't had much writing success in longer form over the last few weeks, feeling a bit creatively dry, so I've turned to poetry to keep the mind ticking over.
Thanks for the positive feedback :)