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RE: The story of Mr. Renhe Ren (Finish The Story Entry)

Oh no, my dear! I don't want you think you "crashed" my opening or you had some hybris, or you missed the point or whatever else...
My whole comment was a free ramble of thoughts, a thing that happens when I read something stimulating and I can't avoid overthinking about it. This is a beautiful thing and you wrote, as always, a nice story.
Frankly, I don't think you showed vanity or did something wrong... that's your ending and you have to be free to write or edit what you want.