Day 71: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: toothache

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Please welcome our newest freewriters @cvmidwife @digitalmutt @brazen and @knightengale

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Prompt: toothache

Set your timer for 5 minutes
Start writing

Publish your piece (include a link to this post if you wish) Use the hashtag #freewrite

Copy and paste your URL into the comment section of the prompt post.

  • Or, if you don't want to publish your freewrite, just copy and paste as a comment under the prompt post.

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Contest and Fundraiser

Today, I only want to tell you about one contest/fundraiser.

This day of the party is a poetry slam and you all can win SBD by participating. My friend @haphazard-hstead is holding a fundraiser party right here on Steemit of our friend @blacklux who was hit hard - together with all in her country - by Hurrican Maria.

So, get your puns and poems on!!! Join the party here

Voting

Remember to check your voting power. Do not vote for a while if you are under 90!
https://www.steemnow.com/ or use https://steemworld.org/

Here is an excellent article explaining how to maximize your vote. It helps you to grow to vote wisely!!

And here is a counter opinion on voting by our freewriter @improv

Read the post hereThis post is talking about using your vote for maximum curation and our fellow freewriter @miniature-tiger won this week!! He knows how to do this! Congrats!

DTube

The challenge is to read your freewrite and make a video of it. Please feel free to edit your stories as much as you wish.

Here is the challenge video


@felt.buzz https://steemit.com/dtube/@felt.buzz/0viza9es @mariannewest https://steemit.com/dtube/@mariannewest/i57961gs And @snook has a lot of them. So good!!

Just remember that Dtube is still in Beta and sometimes things don't work. Just come back after a little while and try again... and drop a link in the comments so I can feature you in the new Dtube section of the prompt.

Let's use #Dtubefreewrite for our readings so we can find each other!

Staying Legal

A must read!!This is an excellent article by @dmcamera on how to use images legally.

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Woo Hoo! I did it! Thank you Marianne. I can always count on you when my brain is not working!

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@fitinfun/5-minute-freewrite-challenge-day-71-toothache

I'm so glad you are here :)

I wrote a story for both this and #story-300words: https://steemit.com/fiction/@ahmadmanga/freewrit-the-rabbit-who-loved-candy-short-story

For those who only here for the story, here is it:

The Rabbit Who Loved Candy

In bunny village, lived a small group of rabbits.
They have a farm with a lot of greens, and they worked together so they can eat hay each day to live healthy.

But one of the rabbits didn't work with the rest.
He didn't like the hay very much and so he didn't want to work on it.
The small bunny loved candy.
They other rabbit told him it's bad for him.
He should work together with them and eat healthy food with them.
But the small bunny wasn't listening.

One day the small bunny tooth hurt and so his stomach.
The dentist bunny told him he ate too much candy and he has to remove his tooth.
The small bunny lost one of his teeth.
And he learned from his mistake and started working with other rabbits.

[The End]

I'm SO happy you decided to join us! You did a fantastic job, especially for your first freewrite!

thank you! I enjoyed it more than I thought I would

Had a nice turn...but, I bet you it happens more often than we know. :-)

Thank you lol :)

Wow! This is a great idea. I've got nothing for this one but I think I'm going to join this group. Thank you!

please do!! And just start writing without thinking that you have to write something good, or something that makes sense. You will be surprised what sometimes happens - or you get a grocery list lol
Here are your weekend options

15 min 3 prompt exercise
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-30-2017-part-1-the-first-sentence

Or single prompt option
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-20-2017-single-prompt-option

Hi, here is my contribution:

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@digitalmutt/toothache-freewrite-challenge

Also, I included a link at the end of that story to a USA resource to find low-cost dental care. It's a government website. Take care of yourselves, Steemians!

This is an awesome post!

This is my prompt. No one ever reads my stories but this is a good one. I hope you like it.Compliments of the seasons.

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@yomibolo/free-write-prompt-toothache

Done! Try Mexico for toothaches! Cheaper than dental insurance.


Marianne, I swear I wasn't drinking (much) when I wrote this!
Welcome to the group @cvmidwife, @digitalmutt, @brazen, and @knightengale! https://steemit.com/freewrite/@brisby/plier-fairy-5-minute-freewrite-day-71

hahaha - just a little helps the writing fairies lol

Those fairies love to drink! :)


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good post, thanks for sharing my dear
ifollow you and appreciate if you follow me

not the way to go at all. Make a comment which has something to do with the post your are commenting on and never ask for anyone to follow you. This will bring you flags and downvotes and you don't want that.

Alright! Two days in a row... I just posted a follow up to yesterday's because this prompt was simply perfect!
https://steemit.com/fiction/@jrhughes/toothache-day-71-five-minute-freewrite-prompt

This is my first time doing the prompts! It was exciting!

Here is my post!

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@snrm/day-1-of-freewrite-toothache-prompt

Also @mariannewest are we allowed to use the top "five minute writing challenge" image at the top of this post for our posts in the future if we don't have a fitting image ourselves?

Freewriteby@snrm.jpg

I made you your own image. I can change the background if you want...

Holy cow! That looks awesome! Thank you so much! I wish my vote counted for more so I could thank you better but I'll continue to write freewrites for sure :).

You are welcome and we love for you to write with us :)

She was waiting, watching.. Would it come today? She was lost without it, she knew nothing for the past few weeks,. She was getting lonely and sad, wondering so many things , her mind was a whirlwind of thoughts. Would it be today? Everyday she waited and waited with anticipation. Oh! Here he comes! She runs to the mail carrier. " Did I get anything today?" He hands her an envelope and she runs back to her swing and rips open her mail.. He's alive! He's coming back to me!

This one took some time to get to, but here it is!

Toothache.