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She was my little princess. With her big brown eyes and her acute voice, asking endless and keen questions, she was my whole world. I used to take her to the park on Sundays. Few moments I enjoyed more than watching her chase the pigeons; her ponytail waving and the sun rays dancing through the strands of hair.
Maybe I was too young to carry such a responsibility, taking care of an angel like her. Just a couple of minutes of distraction separated us irreversibly. I will never forgive myself for looking away. The memory of that day, her tiny shoes pushing the rose pedals of her brand new tricycle, will be my last thought.
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Your short story is really sad :( but I like the way it is spun.
It is one of the saddest feelings a family can face. I'm glad you liked the story.
Uncle Bruni stopping by to read your#freewrite. Many visions going through my mind. Nice job.
Hi, Uncle Bruni! Thank you, I usually attempt to create vivid images with the words I use, so the reader can feel like having a sneak peek on the scene.
great job working the prompt into your story! It is a heartbreaking thought, though.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story! It is heartbreaking, indeed. A terrible experience, I wish it could remain fictional in every case...
You're welcome, and I totally agree with you. Have a great day!
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How sad but beautifully written. : )
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Really well written. And meaningful. Very important to keep in mind how even in parking lots things have happened.
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