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RE: Hexagon of fate — (poetry + generative art)

in Proof of Brain3 years ago

NOTE — I had hoped to complete a short story called "Becoming Number 27" that I'm working on for @scholaris' word of the week initiative. The word is "Hive." However, when I began to work on it I quickly saw that it will require significant length to tell the whole story properly. It may take me a week or two to complete and edit.

It also may need to be split up into a few posts/chapters in serial fashion to be digestible in blog format. I still wanted to participate as having a particular word or image to serve as a "seed crystal" for the creative process is very helpful for me. Also, I am very much enjoying the engagement I've experienced in the Proof of Brain community so far. So here is a Hive-inspired poem — from the perspective of a worker bee.


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When it comes to writing it's better to stay away from rules at first and not expect anything and then something words flow. The moment I think about motive and purpose I lose the meat of what I wanted to write. Looking through Hive I see people recording their daily thoughts and activity and stories that are not complete until they connect with an audience. After that connection is made then the process can continue. Your poem is a much needed rest for yourself and for us. Take your time on the story but don't put it too far away. I'm interested in how you connect the pieces. !LUV

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When it comes to writing it's better to stay away from rules at first and not expect anything and then something words flow. The moment I think about motive and purpose I lose the meat of what I wanted to write.

I can definitely relate to that; it's a double-edged sword in my experience. I think this will be fun — I'll try to brainstorm a few of the qualities I've noticed about creating freeform vs. with rules/constraints.

Freeform

Freeform

Ruled

Ruled

Pros

Cons

Pros

Cons

ExpansiveChaoticOrderlyBoring
SurprisingUnrelatableArchetypicalImpersonal
UniqueAmateurishDigestibleUnoriginal
ExperimentalUnimpactfulRhythmicRepetitive
BoldStrangeConservativeUninspiring
VulnerableUnimpressiveAustereUnapproachable
ExcitingAnxiousCalmingSleep-inducing
TranscendentInscrutableImmanentMundane
AcceleratedUncontrolledPreciseContrived
InspiredParalyzedIlluminatedTransparent
MysteriousInauthenticPleasingDistant
InnovativePretentiousTraditionalStagnant
IndividualEgotisticalUniversalAvoidant
TrailblazingInsultingRespectfulCowardly
BrilliantBizarreWizenedLecturing

Man, tables are the best! I might add more later. Peace!

Without exercise a body gets weak and your writing exercise here is exactly that... exercise.

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