Dear friends
This is my entry for the Tuesday´s 5 minute freewrite challenge of @mariannewest. If you want to participate here you have the rules at the following link.
Shining solar disc
He takes flight every day
carrying a little heat
to a pale heart
who yearns for his presence.
Run through the sky
defying the clouds
covering the soul with light,
her down without thinking about him.
His fast pace unfolds
the mark of the hours without rest
carrying noises in the storm
that interrupt the waves.
It will hide again soon
and darkness will reign again
but as a faithful worker
will be back on time again.
© 2020, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved
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That is an interesting freewrite. Quiet unexpected. 👍💕
This made me fall in love with the magnificence of the sun. Perfect!
Wow! Not only 5 minute freewrite, not only 5 minute freewrite poetry but 5 minute freewrite really good poetry. Well done @felixgarciap
Thank you very much for your valuable comment dear friend.