Rain drops
Life hops
Dark gloomy day here again
Wishing for blue skies to keep sane
Waking noises in the distance
Thoughts of summer in this instance
It isn't the prison felt inside
Feeling like you're there to hide
Dry eyes as you cry
The wet rain outside, oh my
Hairs all tussled and frayed
Emotions short and strained.,..
Especially when this is far away
Summer or spring, why did you not stay
Waking noises in the distance
Thoughts of summer in this instance
Lovely line.
That line actually took me a half hour to write, couldn't find the right flow.. I think it is still not perfect.
When it comes to poetry, right words can be tricky. It is a matter of wordings that matches with the mood and goes with the flow. If that is achieved you got it right.
Rain, your kisses cold as rain, I really loved your writing in general, it is very different and distinct, have a great day.
Hey thanks man. Greatly appreciated
I like this
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Thanks, it was my sully mood waking up to a gloomy morning and rain rain popped into my head but of course I wanted to see if I could express it in a different way.
I enjoyed reading through.. Feeling that you are there to hide?.. Hmm.. Nice.. Some might be wondering what really are you taking about? A lady or the rain..
HAHAHA glad you picked that up, my wife was moving around the kitchen when I was writing that section of the poem.
That is awesome.
Nice.. I loved it
Thanks for sharing its flows well and is that your own pic? Just curious...
Yes, that tree is actually a Blood Plum bloom I have at the front of my house
Oh actually this is not my tree this is actually a blooming cherry tree at the end of my street.
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