That line actually took me a half hour to write, couldn't find the right flow.. I think it is still not perfect.
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That line actually took me a half hour to write, couldn't find the right flow.. I think it is still not perfect.
When it comes to poetry, right words can be tricky. It is a matter of wordings that matches with the mood and goes with the flow. If that is achieved you got it right.