You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: poetic practice - Rain Rain Go AwayView the full contextemrysjobber (68)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago Waking noises in the distance Thoughts of summer in this instance Lovely line.
That line actually took me a half hour to write, couldn't find the right flow.. I think it is still not perfect.
When it comes to poetry, right words can be tricky. It is a matter of wordings that matches with the mood and goes with the flow. If that is achieved you got it right.