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RE: The Ink Well Prompt #17: Action, Dialogue, Narrative | She Lost It

in The Ink Well • 4 years ago (edited)

Thanks,@jayna!

I think Ethan was not so much into Christine after all, but she waited for too long. Butcher was alright. I couldn't hurt Butcher.
I'm glad those lines called your attention; I tried to use that list as a summary of Christine's motivations to dump Ethan, so the reader could understand her and feel some empathy.

Thanks again :)

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