I'm not good enough to write a review in english, but the iniziative is great and I hope you'll find 5 people who could join the challenge and help you spread your story (which I'm following with every new part you publish and finding really enjoyable, even if the fantasy setting of the Childseeker's War was closer to my tastes).
For the other challenge I'm going to tag someone because I really think he could be interested in reading the story, as he's writing one of his own about Splinterlands!
So I tag my friend @ivanslait
Ivan, scusa il tag, ma per l'appunto siete le due persone i cui racconti seguo con piacere, per cui mi sembra che questo piccolo contest sia una buona occasione per vincere un premio (sempre gradito) e magari portare un nuovo lettore a @jfuji :)
Sorry for the tag Ivan, but you are the two people whose stories I'm very gladly reading, so I thought this contest could be a nice way both to win a small prize and, maybe, bring a new reader to @jfuji :)
Grazie per il tag, ora leggo tutto ;)
E se ti piace e ti va di essere aggiunto alla readlist, ci becchiamo anche un bel HSBI che male non fa! :)
oh si certamente!
Oh, that reminds me, I meant to allow for any language as long as there was an English translation included. I'll update that now and let me know if it changes your mind :D
Well, even if I don't like using translators (at least not when I try to write something more complex, like my opinion about something or a review, where I like to use the right words, but, then, I'm unable to translate them correctly and online translators neither do a great job), I'll try to participate, as this time I'm reading the novel since its start :) it's always hard to find some free time, but I'll try!
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If you're using a translator for these comments, I'd say it does a pretty good job!
I will put your name down, but let me know if you need to drop out (there will be no hard feelings 😉). Also we should think about what community to post in. If there is a good Italian language community that would appreciate hearing about the story then that would be great!
Nope, for comments and short writings I don't use a translator, only my awesome (sarcasm over 9,000!) english skills ahahah
A good italian community is Olio di Balena: it could be of your interest? The only downside is that, usually, the majority of us, italians, isn't very good when it comes to speak and read foreign languages.. so there's a good chance that, even if they find my review (if I will be able to write it) interesting, then they won't be able to follow your novel, as your english is way above italian-school level
I'm willing to take that chance! Let's go with Olio di Balena so you can write the main review in Italian. You never know, in the future it could be very useful in helping me reach an international market!
Also, thank you for the kind words! The next episode may start to remind you more of the CSWar style fantasy, but that's all I will say 🤐
Curiously enough, the first ever piece of fiction I tried here on Hive was Splinterlands fanfic! I had a plan to regularly enter the social media challenge with a vignette based on a card's lore. Ultimately I didn't pursue that as S&S soon became a thing and the opportunity for these serial ideas emerged. Though it's still something that I may consider as a way to raise my writing profile here in general 😊
Ahahah I've just read it! I like Grund as a card.. and as a charachter now! You should have kept writing them, maybe, as this one is hilarious and surely helped you gaining a bit more Hive for your effort, due to being elegible for the Spl challenge!