Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Your article is not really a review, more a list of features (you calls it a beginner guide).
In your title you are very positive about the game, but you don't tell us why.
In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
The screenshots are well chosen, although a bit over-compressed. Look into JPEG compression to see how you can improve that in the future.
State of the DApps doesn't perfectly fit in the story, it is more added as an afterthought.
Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text. With too many tags it looks like spam.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks & reviews!
Thanks for the advice, I will try to improve that in the future 🙂
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Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks & reviews!
Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐