Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
- Your article is not really a review, more a list of features (you calls it a beginner guide).
- In your title you are very positive about the game, but you don't tell us why.
- In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
- The screenshots are well chosen, although a bit over-compressed. Look into JPEG compression to see how you can improve that in the future.
- State of the DApps doesn't perfectly fit in the story, it is more added as an afterthought.
- Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text. With too many tags it looks like spam.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks & reviews!
Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐