Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
- The story starts out good, but degrades into a bullet point list of game features.
- Be careful with the use of empty words such as “revolutionary”.
- Too short paragraphs: One-two sentences and no flow. This makes it hard to read.
- In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. Which is missing in your article.
- Okay choice of screenshots, but I would want to see one of an actual fight!
- Title, category and tags are mostly okay. Why do you tag
ugandaandwafrica, they don't seem to be relevant to the article? - State of the DApps mention is not very subtile and doesn’t fit into the story.
- Tweet is okay, but lacks Chibi Fighters flavour
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🧢🧢🧢
Thanks for the feedback , I will use it to better my next game review.