Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
The story starts out good, but degrades into a bullet point list of game features.
Be careful with the use of empty words such as “revolutionary”.
Too short paragraphs: One-two sentences and no flow. This makes it hard to read.
In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. Which is missing in your article.
Okay choice of screenshots, but I would want to see one of an actual fight!
Title, category and tags are mostly okay. Why do you tag uganda and wafrica, they don't seem to be relevant to the article?
State of the DApps mention is not very subtile and doesn’t fit into the story.
Tweet is okay, but lacks Chibi Fighters flavour
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
You forgot to link your Steem article: https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@tesaganewton/qmhtvcu-chibi-fighters-fight-live-battles-and-earn-ether
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
ugandaandwafrica, they don't seem to be relevant to the article?Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🧢🧢🧢
Thanks for the feedback , I will use it to better my next game review.