Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
- It is interesting to read about your personal angle, but it gets a bit long winded.
- In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
- Mixed choice of images, too much of the same, too big, I don’t need to see mugshots of all team members, unless they are rock stars :)
- Title, category and tags are okay. The formatting is inconsistent and you have some broken markdown. Check the Markdown Styling Guide for a refresher!
- I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
- Tweet is poorly formatted and has too many tags, looks like spam.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🐱🐱