Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
It is interesting to read about your personal angle, but it gets a bit long winded.
In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
Mixed choice of images, too much of the same, too big, I don’t need to see mugshots of all team members, unless they are rock stars :)
Title, category and tags are okay. The formatting is inconsistent and you have some broken markdown. Check the Markdown Styling Guide for a refresher!
I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
Tweet is poorly formatted and has too many tags, looks like spam.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🐱🐱