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RE: The Little Wood Mouse

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

wonderful poem @reddust <3 ,,, What do you think about my poem :p

Merry and Merry O Spring of the Year

Shone your follicle Days

After the winter and after the length of his frown

We show you a screen of your pride

And the breeze gave us a rainbow

Deviating from dreams.

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Oh man, I bet you just ripped that one out of like it was nothing. I wish I could write like that!

Thank you for your sweet words, and I wish you more excellence @reddust

I struggle with writing, I admire wordsmiths or is it wizards? lolol

This is what I wrote, it is of Arabic poetry :p

I’ve read some master poets and philosophers from your many and diverse cultures...Rumi comes to mind. I like to study comparative religious philosophy of Sophia Perennis. This is how I learned about Sufi poetry. I know just a tiny-little bit.

http://www.sunypress.edu/p-4906-pathways-to-an-inner-islam.aspx