Hey @jedau!
Oh man, kind kind words indeed. Yeh, this was a story I had planned for a while and was in fact quite a bit longer than this short. I found there were many possible avenues be to explored with the concept. But I can't leaving the book hanging like that for too long, lol.
Thanks, my bro. I personally love pieces where the reader is thrown into the mix and slowly the story is fleshed out through pace and narrative. So your comments are, as always, much appreciated and mean everything to my writing.
May I also wish you congrats on the success you are having with your phenomenal literary artwork. An ingenious twist on perspective, very cleverly done.
Bless you and keeping on writing, my brother!
No, no, no, my brother. The spotlight is on you in this post :D In my opinion, the decision to write this as a short story really worked. Prolonging the struggle might stagnate the impact a little bit, but if there's anyone who could effectively spin it, I just know that it's my bro @ezzy